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How to Answer Compare and Contrast Literature Questions with Success

 Comparing and Contrasting poems, stories or plays.

The question requiring candidates to write a comparative essay is common. In can be found both in Paper 1, Comment and Appreciation, also known as the Unseens, and set-book based papers, for example papers 2, 3, 4, and 5 in the case of ZIMSEC. I'm going to outline the steps candidates should take in order to perform well on this question.

When analysing two literary works like The Lift and The Accident, it's essential to use comparative and contrasting language effectively while maintaining smooth transitions between ideas. You can organise your analysis using the pendulum method (the one I recommend) or the block method, ensuring a logical and balanced approach. Here is a step-by-step guide on how to write a comparative essay. To illustrate the steps, I am going to focus on the typical exam question, "Compare and contrast The Lift and The Accident."

How to introduce a comparative essay

Your introduction should briefly introduce both stories and establish the main points of comparison and contrast. Start by mentioning the time and setting (colonial-era Rhodesia) and the themes (racial tensions, social injustice e.t.c.) present in both works. Then, include a thesis statement that highlights what you will compare (e.g., the portrayal of racial discrimination) and contrast (e.g., narrative style, focus...)

Example introduction: 

"In colonial-era Rhodesia, racial tensions and social injustice permeated every facet of society, as vividly depicted in The Lift and The Accident. Both stories delve into the complex dynamics between African and European populations, yet they diverge in their narrative style and focus. While The Lift offers a prolonged exploration of urban struggles, The Accident  centres on a singular dramatic event, showcasing the societal apathy prevalent at the time."

Use Comparative language effectively

Use comparative language to highlight the similarities between the two works. This includes phrase such as:

  • Similarly, both stories depict racial tensions.
  • Likewise, each narrative highlights social injustice in colonial Rhodesia 
  • In both stories, the characters are unnamed, representing societal groups rather than individuals.

Example sentence:

"Similarly, both The Lift and The Accident address the theme of racial discrimination, illustrating how local populations were treated as inferior to their British counterparts."

Use Contrasting Language Effectively

Contrasting language helps to emphasise the differences between the works. Use phrases like:
  • In contrasts, while The Accident employs a detached narrative style...
  • On the other hand, The Lift delves deeply into the characters' thoughts.
  • Whereas The Accident focuses on a single event, The Lift explores ongoing struggles.

Example sentence:

"In contrast, The Lift allows readers to engage with the characters' inner thoughts, particularly their hunger and desperation, whereas The Accident takes a more detached, observational stance."

How to Transition

Effective transitions are crucial to maintaining the flow between comparative and contrasting points. Use transitioning discourse markers to guide readers between ideas, whether within the same paragraph or when moving to the next. Key transition words include:
  • Furthermore, Moreover (to continue comparing)
  • However, Nevertheless (to contrast)
  • In addition, Likewise (to introduce additional points)

Example transition:

"Moreover, while both stories present racial injustice, the methods they use to engage the reader differ significantly."

The Pendulum Method (Recommended)

The pendulum method alternates between the two stories, comparing and contrasting each point as you go. This method juxtaposes the comparanda closely thus providing a clearer, more integrated analysis.

 To understand how the pendulum method works, take a look at the following example topic sentences:

Paragraph 1: Compare the portrayal of racial tensions in both stories.

The Accident focuses on apathy toward an African victim, while The Lift highlights racial discrimination in job-seeking.

Paragraph 2: Contrast the narrative styles.

The Accident  uses an observational tone, whereas The Lift delves into the characters' inner lives.

Paragraph 3: Compare the characters' representations.

Both stories use unnamed characters to represent larger societal issues.

Paragraph 4: Contrast the structure and focus.

The Accident centres on a single event, while The Lift focuses on ongoing struggles. 

How to conclude a "compare and contrast" essay

Conclude by summarising the key similarities and differences between the two stories and reiterate your thesis (in a different but relevant way). Focus on how both narratives contribute to the portrayal of social injustice and racial tension, despite their different approaches.

Example conclusion:

"The Lift and The Accident offer compelling insights into the racial dynamics of colonial-era Rhodesia. While The Lift focuses on the prolonged struggles of African job seekers, The Accident uses a singular, dramatic event to reveal societal apathy. Both stories effectively highlight the racial injustice of the time, though their methods of storytelling differ significantly. 

Addressing the clause: "How Does Your Reading of A Illuminate Your Understanding of B" (Paper 1, Comment and Appreciation)

At times the question may require students to demonstrate how their understanding of one work enhances their comprehension of the other. Though this may seem daunting at first, it is manageable with proper preparation.

Take it this way, reading excerpt A is like putting on microscopic glasses. It sharpens your vision and allows you to notice details in excerpt B that might have gone unnoticed. Just as glasses can bring out hidden colours or fine details in painting, excerpt A illuminates/enhances your understanding of thematic concerns and techniques in excerpt B, making connections clearer!

What to do

When answering a comparative question that asks how reading excerpt A illuminates your understanding of excerpt B, it is essential to show the relationship between the two texts and how the themes, techniques, or perspectives of one work enhance, enrich, or clarify those of the other. This requires candidates to dig deeper into how the texts interact, not just in terms of similarities, but in terms of what one text reveals about the other. 

Use language to Show Illumination/understanding/enhancement/amplification/augmentation 


The ZIMSEC A Level Literature syllabus states that candidates should demonstrate "their ability to present ideas clearly and logically." So, when tackling a question that requires you to show how your understanding of one work, enhance your understanding of the other, you should use language that illustrates that.  

To clearly address this clause, you should focus on how specific elements in excerpt A highlight, clarify, or provide a new perspective on excerpt B. For example:
  • "Reading The Lift sheds light on the broader social context of The Accident, by highlighting the systematic racial discrimination that underpins both narratives."
  • "The detailed portrayal of African job seekers' desperation in The Lift helps to underscore the apathy toward African suffering depicted in The Accident."
  • "The depiction of poverty in The Lift illuminates the racial and economic disparities shown subtly in The Accident, enhancing the understanding of the broader struggles in colonial Rhodesia."

Examples of Illumination in Action

Consider how the understanding of one excerpt deepens the comprehension of the other. For example:
  • "In The Lift, the portrayal of African job seekers allows the reader to grasp the ongoing, systematic nature of racial injustice, which is less explicit but present in The Accident. This moment of inaction and indifference casts new light on the pervasive hopelessness and exclusion seen in The Lift, emphasising the deep-rooted nature of societal injustice."
So, by framing one text as offering insight into the other, candidates not only compare and contrast but also demonstrate a nuanced understanding of the thematic and structural connections between the works.

Using transitional Phrases for showing illumination

Transitions play a key role in ensuring the essay flows smoothly while showing the interconnectedness of the two works. Phrases like the following help guide the examiner through the illumination process:
  • "This aspect of The Lift highlights a similar concern in The Accident, where..."
  • "The treatment of racial injustice in The Accident enhances the understanding of the socio-economic struggles explored in The Lift."
  • "While The Accident  focuses on a singular event, The Lift broadens this understanding by depicting..."

Examination Tip

If the titles of the works you are analysing are very long and cumbersome to repeat througought your essay, there is an effective solution. In your introduction, tell the examiner that in your essay, "A" refers to the title of the first work and that "B" refers to title of the second work. This allows you to streamline your analysis and focus more on your argument rather than repeatedly writing out the full titles. However, if the titles are reasonably short, use the actual titles as it provides more clarity.

Example Introduction Paragraph with Abbreviations

"In colonial-era Rhodesia, racial tensions and social injustice permeated every facet of the society, as vividly depicted in The Lift and The Accident. Both stories delve into the complex dynamics between African and British populations, yet they diverge in their narrative style and focus. For clarity, thought this essay, The Lift will be referred to as "A" and The Accident as B. While A offers a prolonged exploration of urban struggles, B centres on a singular dramatic event, showcasing the societal apathy prevalent at the time."

How to Practise

Well before you take the exam, practise comparing and contrasting different literary works. Remember, compare and contrast questions can cut across the three genres of literature. For example, the question may require you to compare between a poem and a prose passage. So, as you practise, do not focus on just one genre.









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